Water Sings Blue: Poetry Review (LS 5663 Module #5)














Water Sings Blue: Poetry Review




BIBLIOGRAPHY
Coombs, Kate. Water Sings Blue: Ocean Poems. San Francisco, CA: Chronicle Books. ISBN-13: 978-0-8118-7284-3

So, Meilo. Water Sings Blue: Ocean Poems. By Kate Coombs. San Francisco, CA: Chronicle Books. ISBN-13: 978-0-8118-7284-3

SUMMARY/ANALYSIS
I must begin this review by sharing my absolute love of this poetic picture books. This is by far one of my favorite books, loving both the quirky ocean-themed poems within this book, as well as the captivating, motion-filled illustrations. This book, Water Sings Blue: Ocean Poems written by Kate Coombs and illustrated by Meilo So, is a beautiful collection of themes about the ocean, consisting of twenty-three poems covering various aspects of the ocean, including fish, octopus ink, the shoreline, jellyfish, and even a shipwreck. These poems are guaranteed to entertain the reader, as well as move them through the beautiful illustrations included by each poem. This book would be a wonderful addition in a science classroom teaching children about the ocean, as well as in any home!

The silly, yet descriptive poems found within this book follow a variation of poetry styles. Most of the poems possess a rhyme scheme, coupling the end of every two sentences with appropriately rhyming words. This makes the poem easy to follow and read, as they flow effortlessly, in a way providing the reader with a greater sense of the flowing waves of the ocean. A few other poems, however, such as the poem “Octopus Ink”, use wording free of rhyme to describe an action at hand. This poem goes as follows:

The famous author hesitates
to pick his pen up.
He is shy. But wait!
He autographs the water
with a single word—
good-bye.

Though this poem may not rhyme, the way in which it is written provides the reader with perfect imagery of the scene at hand, creating the image of a shy octopus fleeing, spreading its ink as it leaves. The poems within this book are silly and fun, yet descriptive and successful in bringing ocean creatures and happenings to life! It is hard to choose favorite because I love this entire collection, but some sample favorites are “Not Really Jelly”, “Blue Whale”, and “Octopus Ink”, all chosen due to the expressive language and imagery created within these fun poems, as well as for the wonderful images that accompany them.

These beautiful ocean poems are accompanied by illustrations created through colorful watercolor strokes, mimicking the fluidity of water and the ocean in their creation. These illustrations are quite detailed, using a mix of textured strokes, colors, and tones to create emotions and moods for each poem. The illustration that is paired with the “Octopus Ink” poem, for example, shows a quickly spreading cloud of black ink. The image also shows the tentacles of a peach-colored octopus in motion, seeming to be swimming away as it releases this ink. This adds to the feeling of the poem, allowing the reader to visualize this shy octopus swimming away quickly and covering its tracks by releasing its quickly spreading ink.

This poetic picture book is full of silly and entertaining poems and captivating imagery, creating an overall enjoyable experience for the reader. This would be wonderful to read in school, as well as at home, being easily enjoyed by children and parents alike!

POEM PLUS “TAKE 5” ACTIVITIES
This poem is the perfect example of one of the fun, free flowing poems within this poetic picture book. This poem, similar to some of the other poems within this book, uses an effortlessly flowing rhyme scheme to perpetuate the poem’s story, using rhyming words at the end of every two sentences. This poem is beautifully written, and the reader can easily picture this sea turtle navigating through the ocean, always knowing where she is going without the need of any other creatures help! This poem is best read aloud, following the pause structure of the poem created through punctuation. Accompanying this poem is a vivid, watercolor illustration of the sea turtle, surrounded by coral and some colorful fish friends, swimming above her while she continues on her journey.

Sea Turtle
By Kate Coombs

There’s a wide green map
on sea turtle’s back.
Currents? She knows
their flows, never slows,
needn’t stop for directions
wherever she goes,
flapping her elegant
paddle-shaped toes.

Take 5 Activities
1.    Ask the students what they know about sea turtles and if they have seen one before (in real life, a book, a movie, etc.). Read the poem aloud to the group, having them picture the sea turtle in their mind with their eyes closed.
2.    Reread the poem aloud to the group, showing them the picture that goes with the poem this time. Have the students read every other line out loud this time.
3.    Discuss the image next to the poem and if they pictured something similar. Have a few from the group share what their mental images looked like. What is the turtle doing in this poem?
4.    Pair this poem with the children’s picture book called Turtle in the Sea by Jim Arnosky (Putnam, 2002). Compare this book to the poem with the group.
5.    Link this poem to another poem about sea turtles, such as the poem “The Green Sea Turtle” by P Soe (https://www.poetrysoup.com/ poems/short/sea_turtle, 2012). How is this poem similar? How is it different?

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